Visual Design Publication Final Dissertation and TURNITIN submission (DRD)
14 OCT 2022 - 11 NOV 2022 ( WEEK 7 - WEEK 11)
CHIN ZHI XIAN / 0344352
BACHELOR OF DESIGN (HONS) CREATIVE MEDIA / Design Research Dissertation
Visual Design Publication, Final Dissertation and TURNITIN submission
Introduction
Visual Design Publication, Final Dissertation and TURNITIN submission
Visual Design Publication
Week 7
Mrs Jin Chi start to brief us on the next assignment which is Visual Design Publication after Mrs Jin Chi briefed the assignment, I start to find my mood board. My Topic is Paper-Cut Culture on Modern Packaging Design, so my Visual Design will be in Chinese Culture. I found two types of Visual Reference, the first is layering with a paper-cut effect and the second is Minimalist.
Below is my mood board:
Figure 1.1
Reference Layering
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Minimalist
The final choice I will pick is The Layering style, after I have done the research I start to design my Layering Design.
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Working Progression
I have done my cover page and below is the brush to apply to my cover.
Figure 1.4
Asset (Brush)
Figure 1.5
Book Cover Attempt 1
When I show Mrs Jin Chi to have feedback, Mrs Jin Chi said the brush look like a watercolour brush, and she tell me to change it to a Chinese Brush.
Figure 1.6
Chinese Brush
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Final Book Cover (Front)
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Final Book Cover (Back)
Below is the design of my pages, I will repeat to us the design in different:
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Visual Design #1
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Visual Design #2
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Visual Design #3
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Visual Design #4
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Visual Design #5
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Visual Design #6
Below is the design of my chart:
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Bar Chart #1
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Bar Chart #2
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Bar Chart #3
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Bar Chart #4
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Bar Chart #5
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Bar Chart #6
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Bar Chart #7
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Bar Chart #8
Final Submission
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Final Book Cover
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Book Pages #1
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Book Pages #2
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Book Pages #3
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Book Pages #4
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Book Pages #5
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Book Pages #6
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Book Pages #7
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Book Pages #8
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Book Pages #9
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Book Pages #10
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Book Pages #11
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Book Pages #12
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Book Pages #13
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Book Pages #14
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Book Pages #15
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Book Pages #16
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Book Pages #17
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Book Pages #18
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Book Pages #19
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Book Pages #20
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Book Pages #21
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Book Pages #22
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Book Pages #23
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Book Pages #24
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Book Pages #25
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Book Pages #26
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Book Pages #27
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Book Pages #28
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Book Pages #29
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Book Pages #30
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Book Pages #31
Figure 7.1
Paper-Cut Culture on Modern Packaging Design (PDF)
Figure 7.2
FlipBook
Final Dissertation
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Final Dissertation
TURNITIN Submission Result
Below is my Turnitin result:
When I get the Turnitin result, I felt so happy because I get 7% less than 15% but I also felt weird because my cover page is a lot of paraphrasing.
Figure 1.4
Turnitin Result
Feedback
Week 9
- My colour scheme looks a bit rich as in like not sure if there are too many colours, although I know maybe if I even consider taking them out I know. Mrs Jin Chi says don't know whether it's five of them will be too much.
- The first concept is good for designing my cover page and entire page and the second concept is more towards general Chinese art or Chinese painting with a lot of empty space at the site right. Mrs Jin Chi thinks I can have both aspects in my work which is I can still maintain the paper-cut effect but Mrs Jin Chi thinks space would be important for my book. Mrs JIn Chi says I know at the end of the day I am talking about designing a dissertation, not a creative-only kind of book so Mrs JIn Chi agrees that the paper-cut idea is more straightforward. Maybe I also got to consider not drowning my book with too much of it so maybe What I can do is think about perhaps creating or maybe I have identified a paper cut design that I can maybe keep using throughout the book, but in different ways, zoom outcropped or zoom in repeated. It's the same design so I keep consistency so I don't have too many different kinds of design in my book.
- For the design layout concept, I can go with the second idea. Mrs JIn Chi thinks that is closer to my expression of the topic.
- For the typeface, Mrs Jin Chi thinks the primary typeface will be put for the first plane and she thinks it's better that I also consider a typeface that is san serif or bamboo.
Week 10
- No need to put ISBN number because the ISBN number is a registered book, and don't put that first published in Kuala Lumpur by Tylor's Press because this book is not published.
- Don't forget to put the page number
- The cover page brush looks like water colour brush, try to change it to the Chinese brush.
- The title is not paper-cut culture on Modern Design, I need to double change again for my title.
- For the requirements that I need to include, follow the requirements that MIB provided.
Week 11
- The book design overall look good but I need to take off some pages number for the title page so it can look nice.
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